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one day i was walkin home from the store and 4 large tankss and i couldnt do anything but stop and stear with my bagess in my handss and busses riding down the street i dont no why i didnt see these tanks so im just gona stand here and make sure they wait there turn ,,

Ashana- I like your courage essay. THis is a powerful story. You did not do as much work in the last week, so you have to make sure that you are staying focused in class and completing the assignments.

COURAGE:WHEN YOU STUGGLE THREW SOMTHHIN

There and girl i no very weel she been threw alot she"s very specel to me. first off her mother died when she was 13 she didnt have any one depend on she had family but they didnt realy care becuse they were struglin them selves she had one brother name kavin and two sister erica and muffy when there mother died so they felt as as nobody was there a cuple years later there dad died so they now really had nobody they always were in troble there sister muffy was the olds so she got her house first so she capt them togather when her mother was tookn to ohio raped,strangled and threw in the ohio river at the time she was only 13years old and her brother and sisters were not that older then her so when they found out they didnt know how too go about it so they let every thing that happnd behind them and never asked queastins about there mom to get answers the ladie that im talking about is my MOM as years went on alot happned my house gat shot up and robed and alot more but my mom always tell me be thasnkful for tomorrow and even thought you might not be doing good never let it get to you an never accsped no for an answer, fight for what you wont, work hard never give up && keep ya head up thats corage to me we hen someone came from bottem to the top with out giving up.

This is a really powerful story that does show a lot of courage. I think your paper would be better if it had a clear introduction and a clear conclusion. Take a look at the home page for some ideas on how to get your reader's attention in an introduction. The introduction could also say what you believe courage is and that could lead into your story. THe conclusion could explain how your mother showed that kind of courage in her life. Also, you should copy your essay into Microsoft Word to do a spell check. Make sure you are using periods at the end of sentences in your writing.

Good start here.

on the ashana show we have today nicki manja singer and rapper she's in her 20"s hey"nicki how old were you when you pernts left you? how did you feel? how old were you? what made you choose this creer and why? how took care of you? how did you feel tords them and why? when did you write your first song? why did you write that song and why did you feel that way at the time. what did you choose to do when you were ablel to move on?

i didnt go to school becuase i wonted to be cool and hang out with my friends and i didnt wont to seem like a lame and go to school when they weren't so instad going to school i came too pool with my friends.we stand around all day drinking gin and talkn about every thing but what were going to do for money sence we droped out of school.theres alot of people that hang out here all they do is drink.i wonna go to school i wonna be somthing but deep inside i no ima follewer becuse i dont wonna be a lame in front of nmy friends..

I appreciate your hard work in this class. However, you are starting to be more concerned with what you will do after you finish your work on the computer than with the quality of your work. For example, the three parts of your letter of complaint are not really clear. You want to make sure you are offering a clear solution in a letter of complaint. What is your suggestion?

ashana, well i have a problem with the way the school is doing things. i dont think that the securty gaurds should be able to get a say so on weither a studnt should get sighted or not i mean they do there jod well but at times they get way to carried away i would under stand if they were real cops or really had bages but some of them have bad back rounds so what im really sain is that they need to do there jobs then go home but this problem isnt for all the secruty just one ms.LATAMOR..................

I think that its nice for him to stand up agenst buling but its not gonna help him. I think if people wont help so people wont buly them then they have to stand up for them self. They have to not wonna be bulyed no one should have to make some one tell if they dont wont to be bulyed they should stand up for them self but then agin its not called bulying if to people wonts to fight each other thats what they wont to do they both agreed to show off. but if one person wonts to fight another person that dont wont to fight then thats when you call some one a buly thats what i think about the problem.

A dream that i always wonted to come true is i always wonted to grow up with a great job get married and have only 2 kids the reson why i wont that life is becuase the way im growing up is not the life style that i would wont my kids to grow up in so to prvent that.Im gonna do the best i can do up intill that day comes and i have kids and get married but what i dont wonna do is end up like my mom and have kids young and have to struggle and relie on my mom to do everything for me but when i grow up i wonna be a nurse or a sicatris that helps kids and pernts with there problems i wont to do that with my life becuase when i was a litte bit younger then what i am now i didnt under stand manny things and i wont kids to be able to learn more and no how they feel and why they feel that way and what they can do to help them self. I wont to be a nurs just too help people and fix things and be there for my family and other people that need me.

"hey chance good morning best" what we doin today.I think chilln at your house.ohhh yeah i had fun yeasterday! we might go out to eat tomorrow.

Ashana- You will need to work harder than this in class. You can do it, but make sure you are focused. Also, take a look at the punctuation for quotes on the home page.

I think they sould have each child pay for there own tickit and i thiink they should keep the idea of sellin the hogies so they can be able to get the bus i dont think we should go to hurshy park becuase its not as fun as people think I.think we should go to seterpoint or another park but eaither way it go the schools doing a great jod keep up the good work. or i think we should just take a trip some were we never went befor.like new york becuase when i was in the 5 grade my sister went to new york with our school and they came back with alot of stuff and prices or we should go to a inside park like kalaherry and i think it would be a great trip kids would have fun and always will remember this school.

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Good work on Wednesday Ashana. YOu are working hard and doing a good job. Keep it up. Assingment This hollowen was boring only becuace i think we got too old to go trick or treating it was me my sister my best friend and our friend jade we left my house at 5:00 went too my friendz house watched a movie then went too jades house so she could get dress from there we went trick or treating we walked too penn hils by the time we got there trick or treating was over so we went to my house and watched bad ngirls club nand ate some candy that my mom had becuase she didnt go trick or treating she pasted out candy this year but lol no one came to our house so we had alot of candy left we were so happy then after that we walked to the park talked about me and chances birthday party coming up in jan,2012 then we were about to leve but we wonted too take pitchurs so thats what we did and jade put then on facebook and tagged us in them well thats all we did on hollowen this year next year i think i will do less but yea that was my holloween.....

A person that i inspire is nicki manaj, the reson why i look up to her is becuase so manny people look at her as a person that wont's to be this plasic barbie but i look at it as if she has great creativty and when she wonts somthing she goes after it and acomplish her goles also manny people say they dont like her but when she get on tv with all these new hair styles the main people that dont like her get the hair styels and the close and shoes and sing all her songs i like her becuase her songs are always true and some people like me can relate to what she say her words get to you and you feel simpathy for her and you can tell she's a person that fought for what she wonted when she was growing up she didnt have it all and back were she lived there perents had to leve them and start over for a better life and when they did she was able to go live with then so just hearing that tells you that when she was grown up she stuggled and when she got old anuff she found her dream and fought for what she wonted now shes one of the best girl rappers and a greats singer and she have an inmagintion mind with her vidoes thats why i like her so much..........